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PostSubject: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 31, 2008 10:28 pm

Stage fright

I hid in the shadows; I was afraid
What would I do? What would they say?
Where could I run to? Could I get free?
What would I do if they all saw me?

Instead, I stayed. The time was near
They announced my name, loud and clear
My heart beated faster, my throat had dried
‘I couldn’t leave now,’ I quietly sighed

The curtains were opened, the crowd was revealed
I heard the applause, but I kept my eyes peeled
For the ideal moment, the perfect way
To leave this place, I could not stay

My legs turned to jelly, I could not walk
My hands were shaking, and I could not talk
I began to tremble, overpowered by dread
The fear was too much, I clutched my head

The clapping resided, and all became still
The people were waiting, but I felt so ill
The room began spinning, it couldn’t be stopped
And then came the terrible moment I dropped

I wish that my fright would just disappear;
The next show’s not too far from here.
I have to fight it, I have to win,
Before it totally draws me in…


Wat do you think...?
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PostSubject: Re: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeSat Aug 02, 2008 9:52 pm

Awesome!

I can't hang around long today, but good stuff!
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Hobbies : Singing, dancing, reading and writing poems and stories...and...being random...
Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 05, 2008 10:57 pm

Thanx Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 10, 2008 10:53 pm

Wow, just as Star said, awsome..! I loved it so much..!
When some people try to rhyme they don't get the rhythm, and it doesn't sound right but that was just perfect..! I loved it..!
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PostSubject: Re: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 10, 2008 11:23 pm

I agree . . .
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Hobbies : Singing, dancing, reading and writing poems and stories...and...being random...
Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 10, 2008 11:56 pm

Aww, thanx...and the rhythm thing is so true...I always make sure it's perfect...I can't stand stuff without good rhythm...lol...glad you liked it Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 12, 2008 10:24 pm

Your poems r always good
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Age : 30
Location : Look up...
Hobbies : Singing, dancing, reading and writing poems and stories...and...being random...
Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
Registration date : 2008-04-25

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PostSubject: Re: Stage fright...(poem)   Stage fright...(poem) I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 12, 2008 10:55 pm

Awww...lol...thanx...
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