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PostSubject: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Tue Feb 03, 2009 11:18 pm

INTRO:

I . . . canít resist it.

Itís pulling me in. I . . . I actually really and truly canít fight it. Not that Iíd want to . . . I think. Iím not sure. I donít know anymore.

I donít know whatís doing this to me. Iím not even the same person. What do I do?

Is it . . . is this happening because of him?
Is it . . . is it him thatís doing this to me?

Then . . . then . . . he must be Gifted as well as cute. Damn.

Holy crap . . . am I Gifted? I must be! How could I not have known all along?!
. . . did he do this to me?

Iím so screwed. But not as much as I am scared . . .

Weird, I know.
I'm wanna make it a humor -slash- romance -slash- supernatural kinda story.
Ha. Well. Lets see how well THAT works out.
Bumps?

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:22 pm

Sounds cool! BUMPZZZ!!!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:58 pm

yeah, dunno how the hell I'm gonna do this . . . I think I'll update mansions

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:05 pm

BUMPZZZ!!!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Tue Feb 17, 2009 10:25 pm

Aww, cheers big ears! Here itis . . .



Part 1, Chapter 1

Atlantaís View:


I woke UP, sat UP, got UP, cleaned UP, dressed UP, and then got the car (not mine - stolen) UP and running so I could get to school. Again.

Got to school, went to my homeroom, sat DOWN, put my bag DOWN, put my head DOWN, smashed my fist DOWN on the table and wondered why my life was either screwed UP or speeding DOWN hill.

Crystal: Yo, Atlas! What up?
Atlanta: (scowls) Atlas?! Crystal, donít piss me off.
Crystal: Sorry, sorry! Hey . . . (whispering) I need to tell you . . . Atlanta . . . Iíve got abilities. You listening? Iím Gifted!

I whipped my head up so fast, my neck twisted with a Ďcrackí.

Atlanta: . . . oh my God . . . and ow (puts hand on neck)
Crystal: Here, lemme get that for you Ė

She put her hand on my neck, and her hands werenít just cold. They were FREEZING. So cold that I actually gave a small scream and flinched away. I didnít get it. Today wasnít a cold day . . . not even close. WTF . . . ?

Atlanta: Your ability . . . ?
Crystal: Ice. It freaked the ish outta me, for real. (sits down at nearest desk) But the thing it Ė when it happened Ė that is, when it first found out - I was with Kelly Breeding.

Atlanta: (rolling eyes) Again? Are you gonna ditch all your friends for a pretty boy? Damn.
Crystal: (punches playfully) Heís really amazing, trust me. Please, Atlas Ėgive him a chance.

Atlanta: If you keep calling me Atlas, Iíll give him a chance to run before I chase him with a sledgehammer screaming at him to keep his hands off you.

Crystal gave me One Of Those Looks, but I ignored it. Then, HE walked in, and she gave me a nudge, and Another One Of Those Looks, only more sly. She was a terrible actress. She might as well have just told him that she wants me to marry the guy. I canít even wanna look at him.

I mean, donít get me wrong. Itís not like heís annoying or rude or anything. Heís . . . cute. NO, WAIT I DIDNíT MEAN THAT! Heís just Ė urgh, I canít explain. This guy just . . . does something to me . . .

Crystal: (overly cheerful) Hi Dustin!
Dustin: (cute smile) Hey.

Then his eyes slowly turned to me. I had a compulsive urge to look away from him, or get away, somehow. Jump out the window, I don't care. Like I said, I just canít explain it. And because of that, it scares me.

Dustin: (nodding) Atlanta.
Atlanta: (uninterested) Yeah.
Crystal: (nudging Atlanta) Those stupid extra revision classes have finished now. Thank God! I still donít understand anything I was supposed to learn.
Dustin: (laughing) Yeah, me neither. But hey, itís all over now. We should like, hang. After school.

Oh God. He was too good. I almost hated him for it. I could see Crystal trying to hide her excitement.

Crystal: (coolly) Yeah, awesome. Today?
Atlanta: No. (receives stares from Dustin and Crystal) I mean Ė I canít. Iím busy.
Crystal: (snorts) Doing what? Painting your nails?

What made this joke so funny for Crystal is that she knew I was not that type of girl. I donít care about looking good, just . . . clean. Like any other decent person.

Dustin: Well, drop by when youíve get time. Weíre going to Darrenís.
Atlanta: We?
Crystal: The Breeding Brothers. Duh. (speaking to Dustin) why we going to Darrenís?

He moved closer, pulling up a chair, like right beside me. Oh no . . .

Dustin: (quietly) Apparently . . . heís got powers. The power to blow stuff up. Of course, most people assume heís lying, like the fox he is. But, I mean, I dunno . . . almost all of the mutants were taken to that Control Unit . . .

Minus one. I swallowed.

Crystal: (squealing) Oh, thereís Kelly! (giving Atlanta meaningful look) Iíll see you guys later.

It was silent after sheíd gone. I wished heíd leave. He just kept looking at me with those eyes . . . beautiful eyes, though . . . I didnít know how . . . but they reminded me of someone . . .

I suddenly felt homesick. Which didnít actually make sense, because Iím living where I always lived, only . . . without five other members of my family.

Dustin: Wanna talk about it?

I looked sharply at him. Whyíd he say that? Did he know what I was thinking?

Atlanta: (uncertainly) Ďbout what?
Dustin: What ever it is youíre thinking about that makes you look so hurt and empty.
Atlanta: (bitterly) What do you know about hurt and empty? You donít know anything about me.
Dustin: . . . I know that youíre . . . really brave.

I stared at him again. We were connecting in a really weird way. And it was already too much, I knew it.

Dustin: Atlanta . . . your family . . .
Atlanta: Look, you have four healthy brothers bouncing with joy. Why donít you go play with one of Ďem?
Dustin; (firmly) Oh, step feeling sorry for yourself. Your sisters are Ė
Atlanta: - dead. So leave me alone Dustin. Iím serious. I will hurt you.

I got up to leave but he stood up too and grabbed my sleeve.

Dustin: I donít understand you. Why the hell donít you find them? it not so hard. Just use your powers.

. . . did he just say what I thought heíd said?



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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:39 am

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. . . did he just say what I thought heíd said?

Of course he did! Duh, open your ears girl! Lol...wow...great start...BUMPZZZ!!!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:30 pm

This bit
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you have four healthy brothers bouncing with joy
I wrote with Bryan in mind, LOL! Cause i was writing about his concert in MANSION$ LOOOOL

THANK YOU SO MUCH for your support!
If you're online now, I'll update MANSION$ I think . . .

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:35 pm

Lol...BUMPZZZ!!!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:43 pm

Yaaaay!!!! (chat boxx!)

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:53 pm

Soz, I had to go last night...my sis needed the laptop...

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:50 pm

It's kool.

I'm writing C2.

It is V-E-R-Y H-A-R-D.

*cries*

Star* * *

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Sun Mar 01, 2009 6:06 pm

Awww... don't worry...I have faith in you. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Tue Mar 03, 2009 8:44 pm

Whats C2? Ohhh....chapter 2, i get it now....Great story, all dead sisters...she have 5 sisters? Who are dead? Okay...does she have a crush on Dustin?
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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Tue Mar 03, 2009 10:48 pm

5 SISTERS!!!!!
That would b a bit of a coincedence, don't'cha think? LOL
As 4 the last bit . . . u have to read the rest of the story to find out!

When i post it, that is. Which will most likely be never.

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Fri Mar 06, 2009 1:43 am

Awww...*leaves*...lol..BUMPZZZ!!!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:15 pm

Well . . . u hve 2 help me . . . I don't know when or how, but still . . .

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Mon Mar 09, 2009 9:58 pm

ok...tomorrow?

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:31 pm

YUP!

maybe I'll email my pitful attempt at C2 . . . it'l only be a surprise for Abigail LOL

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:33 pm

Lol...

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:39 pm

That seems to be all you can say right now . . . LOL!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Mon Mar 09, 2009 11:40 pm

I was about to say it again...and again...and again, just there...*leaves*

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Tue Mar 10, 2009 12:08 am

well, it's a good thing to say in awkward moments!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:32 pm

BUMPZZZ!!!

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:41 pm

WHY THANK YOU!
And no, that wasn't a CLE. Just me.

I'll update C2 on B5 forum & and CBomb @ d same tym.
So u can just copy and paste d review, LOL

P.S. CLE=Caps lock Error
P.P.S. R u doing ICT coursework?
P.P.P.S. I'm finding it really hard to revise. I have to meet up with someone . . .

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PostSubject: Re: TOXIC (you can't resist...)   Fri Apr 10, 2009 11:25 pm

ICT coursework? Pssshhh NO. Art comes first. If I can't finish my mood board, I can't move on. Goodbye A*/A/B/C in Art.

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