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PostSubject: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeTue Nov 11, 2008 10:31 pm

Ok, I figured that Chris needed some attention too...it may be really bad, but I'll try. This is called Split Personality...as you can see, lol...anyway...enjoy...

Intro

I watched him, this guy I had fallen in love with. He was great, always there for me when I needed him. Sure he had bad days, and the small scar above my left eyebrow was evidence enough. But he wasn't a bad person. He just...got mad sometimes. But it's cool right?

Ok peeps. Tell me what you think. Honestly.


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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeTue Nov 11, 2008 10:32 pm

Short, I know. But I'm a busy person, okay?
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeTue Nov 11, 2008 11:46 pm

[i]Its Guud, Justt Needs Moree.. Butt Still GUUD! Cool
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 12, 2008 12:19 am

Thanx
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 13, 2008 8:39 pm

Yeah, VERY interesting, girl! Dunno how you gonna have tym 2 fit it in with the other five stories you're doing (literally five stories - how do u manage?) But good luck anywayz.

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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 14, 2008 2:15 am

Hee hee, thanx. I try... Cool
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeFri Nov 14, 2008 11:16 pm

You'd better! LOL
*waits for TTH*
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Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeSat Nov 15, 2008 11:22 pm

I've updated TTH...does anyone wanna do 'How to Kidnap' or give suggestions?
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Hobbies : Singing, dancing, reading and writing poems and stories...and...being random...
Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 16, 2008 12:03 am

xxxJololaxxx wrote:

Intro

I watched him, this guy I had fallen in love with. He was great, always there for me when I needed him. Sure he had bad days, and the small scar above my left eyebrow was evidence enough. But he wasn't a bad person. He just...got mad sometimes. But it's cool right?

Callie's POV
I woke up to my phone vibrating on my bed. Damn. It must have been on all night, which would definitely have run down my battery. I looked to see that it was a text from my boyfriend, Chris. I opened it to see this:

Gd mornin sweetness... <3 xxx C

I smiled, but I was kinda yawning at the same time, so I must have looked pretty stupid. I texted back, then checked the time and saw that I didn't have to be up for another 20 mintues, but if I went to sleep, I'd be more tired when I woke up. So I got out of bed, pulled back the curtains, then went to the bathroom. I brushed my teeth, then undressed and hopped into the shower.

After showering, I lotioned and put on a plain white t-shirt, skinny jeans, and my black dolly shoes. I put on my black half-sleeved cardigan and tied my hair into a small bun at the back, leaving a side-fringe. I squirted myself with some perfume Chris got me; Elizabth Arden's 'Fifth Avenue'. I stood back, looking at myself in the mirror before going downstairs to get some breakfast.

Mom was already downstairs- she leaves the house before I do.

Mom: Oh, you're early. I looked at the time and realised I'd forgotten to wake you up. I thought you'd be late.
Callie: Oh, it's fine. Chris woke me up.
Mom: Chris? Is he here?
Callie: Oh, no, don't worry. He sent me a text.
Mom: Oh, good. You know how I feel about boys staying overnight. Not allowed.
Callie: I know. But you know you can trust Chris, right?
Mom: As long as you do, I have no problem with him.
I grabbed a slice of toast from mom's plate. She was already getting out of her seat, so I knew she was done eating.
Mom: I've got to go. See you later, honey.
She planted a kiss on my cheek as she left, leaving me in alone in the kitchen, eating toast. My phone vibrated again. It was another message from Chris.

Gonna cum nd pik u up 10 minz early- got fingz 2 do @ skool b4 homeroom. B redi. Luv ya xxx C

I replied once again and got up to put the plate in the sink. I got a cup of orange juice, then went to get my stuff ready for when Chris arrived. I loved having someone like him...

Review... Cool


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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeSun Nov 16, 2008 2:38 am

got fingz 2 do

That bit made me laugh for some weirdo reason . . .explain @ schl . . .
Good stuff
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeTue Nov 25, 2008 7:47 pm

BUMPZ!
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeWed Nov 26, 2008 11:22 pm

Awhh that was really good!
I'm gonna like this story... not that I think I could ever not like one of your stories but... yeah. Lol
And for once, I won't moan and ask you to update, well only on this story && only until you finish one of the others. Very Happy Lol

Well seeing as I really liked the first chpater and wanna know what's gonna happen because she said she loves having someone like him and then there was elipsis which suggests something could happen...

Lol

... Okay I'll only do this once...

BUMPZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BUMPZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BUMPZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very Happy
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Hobbies : Singing, dancing, reading and writing poems and stories...and...being random...
Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 27, 2008 6:46 pm

Lol...I'll try my best...Star and I are doing our mocks, you know. Well. you probably didn't. Lol.
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 27, 2008 7:14 pm

LOL! OMG English AGAIN tomorrow. It's like MANSION$, $tolen Kisse$; it happens three times and we're just like urgh AGAIN! Stop, mayne!
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Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 27, 2008 7:26 pm

LMAO.......ur rite...
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Motto : Like a star . . . a star . . . a star***
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeThu Nov 27, 2008 7:51 pm

Razz LOL
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Motto : If u aint got i rite now, u just aint gettin it!!
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeMon Dec 22, 2008 8:47 pm

BTW, Jolola said this story is on hiatus, coz she is to lazy to do it at the moment! Thats not very good is it?
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Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 02, 2009 6:04 pm

Okay, I'll try and come up with something today...
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Hobbies : Singing, dancing, reading and writing poems and stories...and...being random...
Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 02, 2009 7:12 pm

This is for you, Abi, for saying I'm lazy. And to anyone else who's reading, coz I like you. Very Happy

The doorbell rang, and I went to open the door, picking up my bag on the way.

Chris: Hey
Me: Hey yourself.
Chris: I hope I didn't wake you up this morning...
Me: It's okay, I needed the extra time. I actually had more than a handful of cornflakes today. Laughing
Chris: Laughing

I closed the door behind me, and we made the short walk to Chris's car.

Me: So what do you have to do at school?
Chris: Oh, just some stuff...
I hate it when he's vague.
Chris: ...I just need to talk to my English teacher about my essay...
Me: Late again?
Chris: ... Laughing yeah, I guess...
Me: Laughing

Don't get me wrong, he does his work. It's just that sometimes he puts
other things first, so his homework piles up a bit. But he gets it done
in the end. He's a good boy with a bit of a naughty streak in him. But believe me, I'm not complaining.

Chris: I've got ball practice after school so you'll have to catch a ride with someone else.
Me: Okay.
Chris: Sorry.
Me: it's fine, I'll walk.
Chris: Walk?
Me: It's only 20 minutes. Just 'cause I let you drive me to school in the morning, it doesn't mean that I can't walk.
Chris: I know.
Me: Look, I'll be walking home in broad daylight. It's not like I'll
get kidnapped. Laughing And I'm not gonna get sun-dust in my eyes and run
off with some guy to some magical place.
Chris: Be serious. If you're gonna walk, go with Bri.
Me: Bri?
I scrunched my face in disgust. Bri - or Brianna - was my ex
best friend. We were 'besties' until she decided to be a b!tch and try
to steal Chris from me, before trying to spread sh*t about me too. I
doubted that she was fully to blame, but I stuck with Chris
nevertheless, and ditched her. She found a group of equally
low-levelled girls to hang around with, and we've kept our distance
ever since.

Chris: Oh, my bad. What about Sam?
Me: She's got a rehearsal after school.
Chris: For what?
Me: Some dance thing.
Chris: Can't you wait?
Me: It finishes the same time as your thing, so there's no point...Maybe I could wait for you?
A smile spread across my face at the thought. Chris was such a natural, it was great watching him play.
Chris: No.
The smile vanished.
Me: Why not?
Chris: It's a closed practice today. Coach said it's better when we don't have an audience.
Me: (mumbling) Whatever.
Chris: What?
Whoops.
Me: (quietly) I said whatever.

Chris frowned, but he let it go. He hates it when I answer back. He
says it's rude and unnecessary. We arrived at school, and I got out so
he could go to the car park. It's more convenient, coz the car park is
a small distance away from the main entrance, where I go in.

Chris: See you later.
Me: Yeah.
I closed the door and he drove off.

BUMPS?
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeFri Jan 02, 2009 7:17 pm

Great chapter..ooh..conflict..g2g!
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeSun Jan 04, 2009 11:42 pm

Yeah, good chappie, JO!!!!!
And . . . nice car . . .
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Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeWed Jan 07, 2009 12:57 am

Of course the car is nice! It's an AUDI...DUH! Rolling Eyes Arrow Laughing
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Hobbies : Dancing, Cheerleading, Reading, Writing, Going nuts, eating nuts, you know the sort, LOL!
Motto : Like a star . . . a star . . . a star***
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeWed Jan 14, 2009 8:40 pm

LOL!!! u n ur Audi'z..........
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Hobbies : Singing, dancing, reading and writing poems and stories...and...being random...
Motto : If you like me, you're gonna LOVE my alter ego...idk...I feel random
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PostSubject: Re: SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12)   SpLiT P£r$on@lity (12) I_icon_minitimeSat Jan 17, 2009 12:51 am

Yh...lol. Smile I'm gonna try and update soonish.
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Hobbies : Dancing, Cheerleading, Reading, Writing, Going nuts, eating nuts, you know the sort, LOL!
Motto : Like a star . . . a star . . . a star***
Registration date : 2008-04-27

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Okay.
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