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PostSubject: My 'Fire' Poem   Sun Apr 27, 2008 8:25 pm

Woo! What a cool Forum! Very Happy

Okay, this is my first topic, lemme know if I'm doing somethin wrong, kay? Basically, I wrote this poem for a story I dd for FictionPress. Here ya go;

Dancing pretty lights,
Fire in the air, fire in the sky,
Burning like the rush of time,
Screaming like music,
Destruction is war, but death is a blessing,
Fire in the beginning and the end,
Fire is what it is,
The passion of our soul,
The anger in our veins,
The confusion in our brain,
Fire in the beginning and the end,
Fire is life.

Reading it back, now, it's a really weird piece of work. scratch Whatd'ya think?

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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Sun Apr 27, 2008 8:31 pm

kooooool star! methinks u are tres talented (c'est lucie ici) Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Sun Apr 27, 2008 8:38 pm

Kewl...very...interesting...I like it...
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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Sun Apr 27, 2008 10:41 pm

WOW...Thats SOO Amazing!!! Like a Star @ heaven
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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Wed May 07, 2008 9:17 pm

Thank you!!!!!

Much apprieciated!

I wanna write more, but I'll see how it goes.

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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Mon May 26, 2008 11:46 pm

Write more now!
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PostSubject: NEXT PART   Tue May 27, 2008 6:35 pm

Okay, okay. I'll see how it turns out.

Here goes;

Spinning amber embers,
Glowing in the air and in the sky,
Flaming into the heart,
Burning into the soul,
Molding and melting the mind,
Fire in the beginning and the end,
Death and life have no definition,
When the fire of the night burns through,
The dawn fades into dusk
The dusk fades into dark
The dark fades into utter black,
Utter black, utter ash, fire in the end,
The fire must fade . . .

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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Tue May 27, 2008 7:41 pm

Wow...this is deep...as in...it makes you see things differently...it's good...

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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Tue May 27, 2008 9:52 pm

*twinkles* Thank you!

For a moment I was sure I was babbling utter ash.

I mean, utter rubbish, soz. LOL!

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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Tue May 27, 2008 9:54 pm

LMAO...no LMSO!!!

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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Wed May 28, 2008 5:06 pm

Eww, LOL!
Remember Tennis?

Quote :
*hugs* Ewwww!

At the same time! That was funny.

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PostSubject: Re: My 'Fire' Poem   Thu May 29, 2008 9:05 pm

Ha ha, yeah...lol

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