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PostSubject: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:11 pm

a mzdarkstar mini-story
.:*Girls And Guns*:.




If you clicked here for a romance,
Sorry, this ain’t the place.
This is about hustlers, biitches, bosses
Losses and angels that fell from grace.

Girls with guns never see the sun
And never show their face.
They can roll with a man with steel for a hand
But they’ll sink lower into disgrace.

Girls with guns can have a loud voice
Cause no-one hears them call.
It’s make or break at the round table, suckaz
Stutter once and you’ll lose it all.

These girls be ballin like big people…
Bull shidd. Inside they’re just feeble.
Why else put your life on the line
For Gangsta Crap that’s already illegal?

Now I’m not Gangsta or Overly Keen
I’m not a Pro with ma Flow on the scene…
But I’ll say this much, from me, listen up;
CNN ain’t got shiit on thugs.

This is reality, son.
Girls and Guns.
Adult fun.
x

Ministory = short story.
Therefore, quicker end.
Therefore, shorter updates.
Razz

Star* * *

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:11 pm

NOW SIM CAN'T KILL ME FOR MANSIONS!! rawr XXX

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 01, 2010 7:45 pm

lol! Yeah, I guess I can't kill you then. *puts gun away* lol!
This looks good! I like the poem for the start.
And the story's different which I like. =)

Quote :
If you clicked here for a romance,
Sorry, this ain’t the place.

Nice. Smile

And your new siggy. lol! Carnell's the only one that still kinda looks cute. Very Happy
But the spike kinda looks evil. Sad
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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:04 pm

LMAOO I KNOW!!!
Yaaay another day to live!
LMAOO evil spike!
Everyone is going CRAZY right now. o_O
They're changing so much...
they might not even do R&B anynore...

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:05 pm

Oops oh yeah Laughing

Lola’s gun was a Falcon Silencer.

A single fire gun, capable of taking a
jerkass out, without making a single sound.
It stayed in the bottom of the kitchen cupboard.

Her boyfriend (and babydaddy) didn’t
know she had it. Even if he did, he didn’t
think she could use it. He didn’t think she
even knew what one was.

It was better that way. Guys feel uncomfortable
when there’s a chick stronger than them around. Cool

A voice drifted from the other end of the
phone… “What’chu up to Lola?” asked Liz,
another Girl And Gun. Lola checked that
Dustin wasn’t around before she talked;
he was talking to a friend in the living room.

“Omari’s bottle. And I’m cooking a
casserole.” she sighed. “I’ve never had to
watch my patience before, girl but that
son of mine…” she shook her head as
Liz laughed.

“Hahaa! Well you’re still young. Beats me
why y’all wanted a kid anyway – hey girl,
I just finished training!”

Lola juggled the phone and Omari’s bottle,
almost dropping one or the other, “Oh snap –
uh, congrats babe. What did you get?”

“A DY357 Magnum. It’s tiny, but it packs a punch.”

“Niiice! Treasure that gun, it’s a new model.
Babe I gotta go. Y’know. Baby. Hubby. Dinner. Life.”
They both laughed.

Lola could hear Dustin and Dollas’s voices
getting louder. Were they arguing…? “Okay,
we’ll talk later.” Lola smiled and hung up.

As she looked in the cupboard for a
serving dish, she saw the Falcon Silencer.
Picking it up, she traced her finger along
the sleek machine, a smooth shape, the
silver cold to the touch. It was a state of
the art delicacy, and she was lucky to get it.

Her fingers curled around it as she smiled.

Power in her hand.

BOOM.

"What the hell is wrong with you?"

“Back the fxck off!” she heard Dustin cuss,
and her head snapped towards the sound;
there was a struggle happening in there,
and if she went to help, it meant revealing
her position…

Unless she killed them both. Obviously.
You never show your face…

She heard a thud, and felt a wave of dread.
That sounded like a body, hitting the floor...
in less than four seconds, she got herself in
there, target, lock, aim –

SSSST.

The Falcon Silencer.
A single, streamlined bullet.
A gun so quiet, you’d never know
anyone had been killed.

Transmission: Lola
This is Lola G&G, help… please!
Dustin’s unconscious… someone
attacked him and… I think I killed them!

Transmission: Girls And Guns;
Nancy

Then his friends and the police will
be looking. Stay calm and composed.
And don’t forget to hide the gun.
End Transmision

Lola cut the line and hugged her knees,
feeling more scared than she’d ever felt.
She had a baby upstairs, for Christ’s sake!
She was finally starting to understand
why girls never involved themselves with
the backstreets business, aka The Webs.

Girls with guns always went from
bad to worse.

They can roll with a man with steel for a hand
But they’ll sink lower into disgrace.


“I’m, so sorry Dustin…” she moaned, sitting
beside his unconscious body. She had no
idea how he’d react when he woke up and
realised what she’d done.

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 01, 2010 8:49 pm

Oooh good! Very Happy
You're seriously such a great writer!
I admire you! Very Happy

And oh my, not doing RnB anymore! Shocked
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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:01 pm

Don't even go there...
I'm on the brink of crying...

Aww thanks... that really makes
me happy. Sometimes I just feel
like i'm so CRAP but I'm not gonna
give up. I will get better! =]

And this isn't even my recent work,
which is even more tight. So that's
GOOD! Laughing


Elizabeth’s gun was a DY357 Magnum.

A new model, it was small and cute. Aww.
It was also LETHAL, FATAL AND BRUTAL.
No shiit.

Transmission; G&G. Nancy
G&G Lola needs assistance. Create a
reason for someone to go with you and
see if she is alright. Not as a girl, but as
her friend. Rana will be undercover
as back-up. End Transmission

Liz grabbed her purse, phone, jacket, keys.
She patted her pocket to check that the
Magnum was still there, and smiled when
she thought about what she’d achieved
to get it. She’d pushed herself, become
stronger than ever, and she was proud.

Why?
Because she still thought Girls And Guns
were amazing. She’d be prepared for everything…

Why else put your life on the line…?

…but the reality of a cruel life.

She poked her head into the main room;
“Kelly, Evonne, Patrick, Rell – can one of
you come with me to check a friend?” Liz
said.

“I’ll go.” said Kelly immediately.

“Not you,” she said quickly, “Rell?”

“Haaa - Kelly you got dissed!” Rell laughed.
Kelly glared at him but got up anyway.
Liz started panicking –he wasn’t giving up.

She was scared.
In training, she’d almost given away her
position to Kelly. He suspected. And he
could tell Carnell, a G&G hunter.

This was baaad.
It was an awkward walk.

“Y’know,” Kelly said suddenly, “The more
you act like that, the more I know I’m right.”

“I… don’t know what you mean.” Liz lied.

“Of course you don’t. But Lola will,
won’t she?” Kelly smiled. And started
whistling. Liz stopped in her tracks.

“iight listen. What the hell is your problem?”

Kelly stared at me and shrugged. “Poor
Liz. You think it’s all a game. You keep
playing Gangsta and you’re gonna die.
And I just spend my last hustle money on
these ice creams,” he pointed to his
brand new sneakers, “…so no nice funeral
for you.” she smiled widely then kept walking.

Liz was furious. How dare he!
Kelly had no-idea what he was talking
about anyway. She took deep breaths
and touched her pocket again.
She smiled.

Power in her pocket.
She felt confident.

These girls be ballin like big people…
Bull shidd. Inside they’re just feeble.


NO! No. It wasn’t true. It’s a lie.

Kelly turned around and yelled down the
street, “You comin’ or what?” Liz smirked
and caught up with him. It was easier now.

“Please…” That was Lola. She was
hysterical now, because she’d put ice on
Dustin’s head but it was slowly seeping
blood and Omari was crying upstairs.

“Lola! What in hell…?!” Liz hurried to
her and hugged her tightly as Kelly
kneeled by his brother, stunned. Liz took
a quick peek round. No body. No blood.
Damn. Lola was strong to carry Dustin’s
body to the sofa. Liz smiled. Lola, being
an elite Girl, was her idol.

“Why didn’t you call an ambulance?”
Kelly exclaimed.

Both Liz and Lola’s muscles stiffened.
They were both thinking the same thing;
‘Because they’ll ask questions.’

“I’m sorry…” said Lola with distress.
“I just panicked.” Liz smiled again.
She adored this girl.

“I’ll do it now. Have you got a – OW!”
Kelly stumbled over to the side, then bent
down and picked up a bullet.

A single, streamlined bullet.
Then he stared at the girls, staring
back at him.
No-one spoke.
…………………………………and then…
And then someone knocked the door.

“It’s them…”

“Paramedics?” asked Lola anxiously.

“No.” he looked at them meaningfully.
Dollas’s crew.
o_O
Kelly had to let out a small laugh when
he noticed that both girls immediately
laid a hand on their gun. “Look, go
wait upstairs, see if you can try and
hush up your kid, Lola.”

The girls nodded and did as he said. Lola
whispering, “Omari, shhhhhh. Be a good boy…”
Omari settled down, but he was restless.

Liz tried to keep herself calm but it wasn’t
really working. Lola sat on her bed, looking
afraid, with one hand on the Falcon Silencer.
“I have to go see, Lola…” Liz whispered,
opening the bedroom door.

“Liz – no! Wait!”

Liz was already creeping down the stairs,
peering through the railings at the hallway
to see Kelly talking, but she couldn’t hear
what she was saying. She watched them
all carefully; one guy had his hands in his
pockets. Another had them folded and the
last one had them behind his arms. Any of
them could have a gun.

Liz felt uneasy, because if any one of
them saw her she’d probably have to
make up some BS.

Or she could kill them all and knock
Kelly out first. Shocked

This is reality, son…

“Who’s that?” one said, looking up.

ZIPPPPT ZIPPPPT ZIPPPPT

That what they would’ve heard if she
decided to kill them. “Ay, what the hell’s
goin’ on?” she said quickly, indignantly.

“Don’t worry bout it ma.” said one of them.
“We’re just -”

“What do you want?” she said pointedly,
descending the stairs. They all looked at
each other. They could tell by her tone
that she wasn’t letting it go.

“We’re looking for Dustin.” another one
explained. “We can’t find Dollas…”

“Well, Dustin and Dollas…” Liz snuck a
glance at Kelly. ‘Not here!’ he mouthed.
“…ain’t here.”

“Like I just said. So I guess we’re done
here.” Kelly smirked. They slowly nodded
and left. Kelly turned to Liz. “Why didn’t
you shoot them with your femininity gun?”

“’Cause then I’d have to shoot you too,
jerkass.” Liz smirked back, “That is, if one
ever existed. Which it doesn’t.” They both
smiled. They both knew that Kelly knew,
but they also both knew that Liz would
never ever admit to it. But they were kinda
cool now. Liz truly believed Kelly wouldn’t
tell anyone.

But with G&G, you can’t take chances.
And you can’t make mistakes.

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 08, 2010 11:20 pm

Evonne’s gun was a MagSec 4.

She kept it wherever she put it last,
because she didn’t care about it.
She was in line to receive a top class
weapon, the area gun ‘AR34’ for elite
gunners, because of her outstanding
award.

Instead, she got a downgrade, because
she didn’t have the nerve couldn’t finish
training.

The MagSec 4.
Not as accurate as the Falcon, but it
makes up for marksmanship with pure
power. Plus, it makes a cool noise when
it fires. reload rate was fast and it ate
ammunition like nobody's business.

But Evonne still wasn’t satisfied.

    Flashback;

    “Ready for your big day, Evonne?” Liz
    grinned. Thy were in the armory as Evonne
    got ready for her final exam before she
    was officially qualified to own a gun,
    like a contract, so she wouldn’t
    abuse it. The G&G weren’t murderers.

    “No. I’m scared.” she admitted. “And
    there are those rumors that Rana badly
    hurt Asia.”

    Liz kissed her teeth. “Rana’s a traitor. I
    hope Asia hurt her good. But Asia
    shouldn’t’ve have gone alone,
    she should’ve waited for Lola.”

    “Yeah, yeah, we all know Lola’s your
    idol,” Evonne laughed. “It’s already risky,
    because she’s going out with Carnell.
    He was getting suspicious.”

    Liz stared at Evonne. “What? Really?
    As in… our cousin Carnell?”

    Evonne rolled her eyes. “Well naw, ya
    don’t say.” Evonne grabbed her bulletproof
    vest and slipped it on, then flooded her
    arms. “Well, you don’t have to worry
    cause you’ve completed training.”

    Liz sat down, looking at her gun.
    DY357 Magnum.
    “Yeah but… training is so different to
    living the life for real.” Liz looked up.
    “The only reason you get to graduate
    early is because you saved those girls’
    life. You got lucky - ” Liz sighed. “Look,
    be careful.”

    Evonne watched her go. She was right.
    Evonne really wasn’t cut out for this.

    She remembered that day, she was just
    walking down the street, literally. Walking
    down the street when asshole with guns
    and swagg rolled around the corner,
    harassing the girls. She assessed the
    scene quickly, and knew those girls
    were in trouble. Without quite knowing
    why, she decided to help them, acting
    within second to change what could’ve
    been merciless murder.

    Nancy was so impressed.

    Evonne was shiit scared.


Losses and angels that fell from grace…

A few hours after Kelly and Liz left,
Carnell stopped by. Evonne took one look
at his face and knew Asia was dead or
worse – almost dead, and in the worst
pain. Now he was gonna want answers.

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Mon Jan 11, 2010 10:14 pm

LOL are you seriously reading it again?!
Oookaaai....
Merci pour la bumpé!


Asia’s gun was the exclusive AR34.
For about 24 hours.


Capable of clearing a room in seconds.
Thus it’s title as an Area Gun.

The accuracy and range of this rifle make
it a good mid-range assault rifle. Not as
fun as the Dragon, but tons better than
the K7.

“Leave me alone.”
She shouldn’t’ve been out so late.
The city was horrible at night.
Danger on every corner.

“Now you don’t have to be like that, sweetie.”
One of the guys laughed drunkenly, walking
beside her. She gritted her teeth and ignore
them, all four of them, walking beside her
like they were all friends.

She just wanted to get home.

“Look we got a car just around the corner,
how ‘bout you and me have all lil fun, huh?”
another one said, slinking an arm around
her shoulders. She shrugged it off, furious,
walking faster.

G&G had taught her that it was more
dangerous to run in the type of heels
she was wearing. ‘Idiot.’ she thought angrily.

“I don’t wanna have fun with you.” she spat.

“Aw, why not?” they leered.

“Cause y’all can’t handle what I got.
Now shove off.”

“You wanna see what I got?” the first one said,
standing in front of her. She stopped and sighed.
She didn’t wanna have to kill a bitchass tonight.

“I ssen all shapes, all size. now will
you fxck off?” she said defiantly, folded
her arms. They all laughed. They laughed,
like they thought she was small and helpless.
Poor little girl.

“You seen this one?” came a voice from
behind her, and she felt metal pressed
against her head. She smiled. “You’d do
well to be a good little girl -”

“Oh sugar…” she said sympathetically.
“You just gone and made the worst mistake
of your life.”

The AR34.
A brand new prototype.
An upgrade from any other wide range
gun there was.

They were unconscious within four seconds.
Good thing she had the gun on stun mode.
She didn’t wanna have to kill a biitchass tonight.

“Where the hell were you?” Carnell
exploded, the moment she got home.
She felt bad that he was waiting for her
all this time. Then he saw the look on
her face. “What? What is it?”

“I’m just tired.” she smiled weakly. “I’m
sorry I didn’t call or nothing, I just… got
caught up.” he sighed and pulled her into a tight hug.

“Please. This organization thing you’re with…
its draining you.” he looked into her eyes.
“I’m asking you to just… just stop.
While you have the chance.”

Asia looked at her feet. Carnell let her
think about it and went to watch TV or
something. Asia sighed and closed her
eyes. Sometimes she didn’t feel good
enough. She wished she was Lola,
perfect life. She’d never ever told her,
but she’d admired her best friend.
The only thing good right now was
Carnell.
The best thing that had ever happened to her.

What Asia didn’t know…

…was that at the same time she stunned
four men in defense, her idol Lola had
accidentally killed someone.

Transmission; G&G. Nancy
G&G Lola needs assistance. Create a
reason for someone to go with you and
see if she is alright. Not as a girl, but as
her friend. Rana will be undercover
as back-up. End Transmission

Asia gasped and stumbled to her device.

Transmission; No, no! Nancy this
is Asia – you can’t send Rana. That
undercover mission I went on – Rana’s
the traitor! Oh shiit -End Transmission

“Oh shiit…” Asia whispered. She knew
Nancy wouldn’t get the transmission in
time. “Babe I’m gonna go get some…
bread and cheese!” she called, and
rushed out the door again before he
could stop her.

She felt awful for doing this AGAIN.
Shite shite shite.

Asia was Lola’s ‘rival’, but the part most
girls overlooked was that they were best
friends too. They both became elite girls,
smart, pretty and a genius at The Game,
knowing The Hood and The Webs inside out.

Asia has a Falcon Scope.
Lola had a Falcon Silencer.
Evonne was a trainee, but highly respected,
due to the fact that she saved the lives of
three girls using quick thinking.

All were in line for AR34.

Evonne couldn’t complete training, and
Lola made a mature decision and passed
it up, for the sake of her family.
Asia proudly nabbed it.

“Stop right there.” Asia hissed, holding
her AR34 to Rana’s head. Rana slowly
swiveled round, smirking. Asia looked
up to Lola’s house, peaceful, undisturbed.
They didn’t know who was outside.

G&G use any opportunity to strike their
opponent, using their weaknesses as an aid.

“Carnell…?!” Rana gasped, and
Asia’s heart stopped as she half turned
around…

…then instinct kicked in. She was lying!
Like a fool, Asia turned back around in a
split second, raising her weapon -
…too late.

“ASIA!” came a yell.
‘Oh. So she wasn’t lying…’
were Asia’s last thoughts.

Why else put your life on the line…

At round about this moment, a tear-stained
Lola was opening the door for Kelly and Liz
across the road, oblivious to the fact that
there had been a murder across the road
in the alleyway.

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Tue Jan 12, 2010 6:34 pm

Man...gets me every time...*shakes head*
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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:00 am

Crying or Very sad

Well, that was a ncie little - AYYY!
There's one more chapter. Oops Laughing


Rana’s gun was an K7 Avenger.
Was. It's not hers anymore.

A hulk of black metal, this weapon was
best when held with two steady hands…
Or one strong one.

Rana’s phone silently vibrated, and she
answered. “I’ve found her, the Girl and
Gun protégée. Lola. A man just went
inside – Dustin’s friend, I think.”

“You realise that after you kill her, your
cover will be blown.”


Rana paused, staring at the home in front
of her. “Unless I can frame Liz…”

“You can’t. We’ve just done a Location
Lock - she’s with a witness.”


“Shiit.” Rana kept watching the house.
She could see a shadow moving back
and forth. Raising her Avenger to aim
with one strong hand, she zoomed
in to see the worried face of Lola. Then
she picked up her phone again.

“Take her out silently.”

“Affirmative. I’ll just kill her and go.”

“Acknowledged. One more thing…
PRYDE are coming.”


Rana blood froze cold. PRYDE. Hunters.
And they hunted traitors, like her. If she
killed Lola, or anyone else when they
were around, her cover was so fxcking
blown. You don’t find a young girl walking
around with special technology like the K7 Avenger.

Rana raised her gun again with both hands.
Two strong hands, for double deadly
accuracy. We’re talking point-blank; she
might as well have been standing right in
front of her. Lola was pacing back and forth,
stressed, a gun in hand… the Falcon Silencer.
‘You’re making this to easy…’ Rana thought,
smirking.

TARGET LOCK… aim…

The fact that it took a while to reload after
you emptied a round meant that every one
shot would count. But Rana only needed one
shot –

“Stop right there.” came a hiss. Shite.

G&G were taught to think fast. Fortunately
for Rana, she didn’t need to think. “Carnell…?!”
she frowned. Asia went pale and started to turn –
in an instant her head flickered back but –

CACKK.

Rana had already fired. “ASIA!” Carnell
yelled, running forward. he must’ve followed
her… Rana was already running in the
opposite direction, but there was a screech
of wheels as a black van wheeled
around the corner, two men slid out, grabbed
Rana into a bone-crunching grip, and
they disappeared with her into the van. No one
saw her again.

“Jeez, why do these people gotta drive
so fxckin crazy in these streets?” muttered
Liz as she stepped inside Lola house with
Kelly and shut the door.

Thee Ende.
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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Wed Jan 13, 2010 1:02 am

HEY, ONE PAGE!
Pretty good, i say LMAO

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Thu Jan 14, 2010 7:54 pm

Waaaahhh...i swear, this needs more...can't just end THERE!!!
BUMPZZZ!!!

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:00 am

THE HELL IT CAN!

LOL Aww. I think to add more,
it would need to be DEVELOPED
DRASTICALLY Laughing

I may repost it on the other forum
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But first u need to post SDS hehehe

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Fri Jan 15, 2010 11:20 pm

*sighs* You can wait...but I don't know how long it'll be for...I can just tell you that it's gonna be a loooooooooooooooong time... Cool

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PostSubject: Re: .:*Girls And Guns*:. [DONE]   Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:41 pm

............. JE DETESTE TOI.
Mad
don't even know
if that's right, LMAO

JUST POST THE DAMN FIRST CHAPTER
I'LL DO ALL THE REST IF YA WANT,
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